Fruits Basket Characters Pt.2

Part 1 and 2 are actually all on the same piece of paper but it couldnt all fit in my scanner, the same goes 4 part 3 and 4, n e ways my favorite pictures here would b the first 2 of course i like drawing all the characters in pencil but i really wanted to do a color piece so i pulled out my color pencils and got to workin a few of them like hatsuharu, machi, arisa, and rin i had to do over though. and to appreciate this piece fully u might wanna see the fullview, if u notice the zodiac animals are the border

i have to say i was dissapointed with myself here, kagura looks weird and i hate the way her hair came out!!!!!its horrible. i like rins alot but becasue i had messed up on her u can see all of the crease and lines from the previous one. on top of that i spelled kakErus name wrong!! i had actually put manabe but change it at the last minute, the only thing i like her is yuki but i think his hair looks sorta weird, but this is really like the oonly fan art ive drawn of yun well unless u count that cat v.s. rat thing.....hes not hard to draw its just his hair that KILLS me whenever i draw it he comes out looking like a masculine girl...
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